Metal Gear Solid: Gates Of Heaven

Chapter:1''Snake get down!'' The voice reverberated through his headset so suddenly it almost made him jump, but he was trained better than to do that.He dropped, flattening himself against the cold marble flooring, still he could feel the heat of the bullets as they whizzed overhead. Suddenly, with a push of his feet, he was up and running towards the large concrete pillar which was one of the few objects keeping this huge complex together. He estimated the amount of steps it would take him until he reached his only cover, 4, 3,2, 1. With a graceful dive he rolled behind the pillar, but not quick enough, one of the bullets had struck the concrete side and had sent hundreds of razor sharp shards flying through the cool night air, many of which made contact with his face. ''Where did these guys come from?'' he yelled back into his comm. link once he had wiped the slowly dripping blood out of his eyes and peaked out to see the 4 advancing enemies, only to be forced back into cover by a foray of bullets. ''I was told the site was clear when I made my air drop!'' ''We aren't too sure Snake they just appeared on the radar a few moments ago'' replied Colonel Roy Campbell. The Colonel has been with Foxhound since its creation in 1971 and was a very respected and honorable man, who has helped snake through many of his toughest missions; Snake doubted that he would fail him now.''Well good thing is that they aren't very well trained.'' Snake calmly replied as he observed one of the most primitive flanking maneuvers most commonly used during the Napoleonic Era. It has since been recognized as one of the most ingenious military moves in history, but has been taught in almost every combat training course since then. Snake carefully predicted their movement, and fired two precisely aimed shots with his .45 caliber sound suppressed handgun directly into enemy number one's chest.''One down three to go.'' he whispered to the Colonel as he repositioned himself back behind cover.With the quickness of a cheetah, taking chase along on of the long plains of Southern Africa, he reloaded and swept his gun around the corner of his concrete barrier, firing three times. One, shattering the giant fluorescent bulb directly above two of the hostiles. Bullet number two went screaming into the cranium right above the eye of the second of his squad of opposition, turning his brown facemask into a dripping pouch of blood and brain matter. Three went into the steel door from which the opposition had just recently appeared from. The sudden activity of such speed and precision stunned the third opponent leaving him open to one of snake's homegrown, custom pieces of metal pulverizing his neck as the bullet collided with his jugular.''Situation Green'' Snake calmly spoke into his microphone. Green indicating that the action that had just taken place had ended without any harm done to Foxhounds favorite agent.''Glad to hear it'' replied Sophie Grey, foxhounds expert field annalist and mission planner. ''Next you will need to head straight through the steel doors ahead of you and into the boiler room wh''''Hold on Sophie I think I just heard something.'' Cut in snake. Suddenly there was a cold feeling of metal on the back of snake's head.''Another sound and I blow your brains out.'' Whispered a cool deep voice into snakes ear. There was a kind of control and composure that was present his voice, a kind that comes with years of experience. ''Now give me your headset'''' I would expect more from the legendary Solid Snake, now you are coming with me''Metal Gear Solid: Gates Of Heaven
Whoa.....wait....did you write that? If you did, GREAT JOB! That was great.Metal Gear Solid: Gates Of Heaven
My first thought was that this is part of the interactive comic-thing being released to the PSP, but I have my doubts.
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nope that was 100% original, straight from my mind.i have chapter 2 and part of 3 written up but i just need to type it and sand it and make it flow smoother.
thanks alot guys for the support!!anyone else?
Please put this in your blog or on a UCB/Union that would be appropriate for this. You're welcome to link it in your sig.